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Dino's (Lyric) by RGSsparky

Dial-A-Pizza Dial-A-Pizza Open 7 days a week, 5pm til Late o'clock With free delivery, Pizzas Pizzas Cheap-ass pizzas 2 for six pounds, Thats why I buy from Dino's The best pizza shop in town.

Bobjim 15-Nov-04/8:11 AM
I feel this could have been taken further. Why not describe the clientele in intimate, if incorrect, detail.




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