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Two Eagles (Free verse) by Frass

The window washers look in at me swarthy brown skin sweating Aztec twins, conquistador progeny Cool Within I tap Keybored Four floors up they spin Their eyes flashing, obsidian knives They have received little training for such stunts Four centuries from a noble past Extinguished Like eagles with snakes dangling in their grasps The braided cable, glinting, slides past Rattling in ascension towards the sun

Christof 27-Aug-02/7:48 AM
This sounds great and I like the cultural history clash - this is an era caught in a moment. I don't like 'Keybored' though - tricksy.




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