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School (Free verse) by shwenatjadeflower

Today was the first day of school. Tonight I won't play pool. Cause the place i go is 18 and up and you have to go late when the bouncer is fucked up. Heh. My hair is bright red. I wish I were dead. My life is shot to hell. Damn that tardy bell. I missed it, and already I'm egging summer on. I saw my old crush. My lunches are mush. Best friend vanished. Hope I won't get banished for my bright red hair.

shwenatjadeflower 26-Aug-02/6:57 PM
You are so sweet to say so Doylum. I am glad you enjoy my "poetry" I wish there wasn't a limit on the amount of poems I could write per week. When I get worked up over something I just wanna log on and write. But i can't as often as I want. but that's what all these poems are. Your comment made my day. Thanks. ~Jade




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