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Untitled (Free verse) by Imago

I felt the air turn solid I was dissolving in it soon I was merely a wisper But upon these eyes that can't be seen fell the living sonnet and all the hosts of joy and dispare

Imago 25-Oct-04/7:34 PM
I agree. It needs finished. It needs the sonnet. But that ain't done yet.




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