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Untitled (Free verse) by Imago

I felt the air turn solid I was dissolving in it soon I was merely a wisper But upon these eyes that can't be seen fell the living sonnet and all the hosts of joy and dispare

Imago 25-Oct-04/10:42 AM
I think I should lose the (in it) of line 2. Seems unnecessary.




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