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Hope (Free verse) by gianni

When the leaf that falls turns silently over, Will all the wars end in a cold surrender? When the tiny bird feeds from the ground, Will everything that was forever lost be found? When the sun rises on a brand new day, Will all the painful memories go away? When the world is dead, and our bodies are laid, Will we then realize the mistakes we made? The answer to these questions we can only guess, But we can always hope that the answer will be yes.

alexander 26-Aug-02/4:51 AM
Why not warm surrender ? Ortherwise not bad- 7/10




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