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STANDARD VERSION: Adam knew Eve and she conceived EXPANDED VERSION: Eve knew not that Adam wanted to know her One day, Adam saith "Eve, let's know" She saith no and he taketh it as yes Verily, before she knew it they were knowing They knew and knew until all was known Then Adam saith unto Eve "Woman, thou triest to slay me I crave sleep I hunger for sustenance" Eve saith unto Adam "Nay, let us know more Thou hast awakened knowledge and filled it with terrible desire" Thus Adam knew Eve and she conceived

jroday 9-Oct-04/3:51 AM
I like the concept of it.




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