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As I wait to shoot a mallard, I consider life (Free verse) by somemorepoetry

[Tomorrow is a swallow faster than death and coming forward to close in like a bracket] But pulled back and Straightened, a summer reed Driving downward and Deep into the mud Is the past Only stirred By the breeze Of memory And today is a gunshot direct and unavoidable, Leaving us to deal with the aftermath, and the ellipsis of what might have been...

INTRANSIT 6-Oct-04/8:09 PM
Another poem that deserves at least some light but will get none. damnit.




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