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I Win. (Free verse) by LintyWeenis

Maybe it was my calling Him a jerk, that pissed him off the most. It might have been when I shouted his name "I hate you,Holy Ghost!" But whatever it was he got me good, he thinks he's really won. That's what I thought when I logged on and all my writings were gone. I did not cry I did not try, to understand why I was in such shit. Instead I grabbed a tiny flame and church with my name all over it.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 4-Oct-04/2:15 PM
I disagree with you on the bow'ls thing. Consider the sentence:

"It is sunny."

It doesn't contain any 'negatives' in your sense of the word. But it is semantically identical to:

"It is not overcast."

Does that mean it contains a negative? No.

The fact that "bow'ls" can mean "incorrect" doesn't mean you're being redundant if you say "It is not bow'ls". Your use of "incorrect" as the interpretation of "bow'ls" is slightly arbitrary as far as the number of 'negatives' is concerned. You could equally interpret "bow'ls" as meaning "positively bumcombe!". That doesn't have any 'negatives'. Do you get what I'm saying?




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