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St. Patrick’s Cathedral (Free verse) by Dovina

Familiar themes in architecture and art Bloodstained head, hands and feet A stone beside a hillside tomb The fact of death graven In skull and grave Quiet kneeling in massive hall Alcove candles glowing dim Saints’ fixed eyes staring down Artwork preaching from thick stone walls Glass stained with Mother’s face Arms stretched to humble sheep Some may know what they seek in church And why they seek it here But in the struggle for revelation To transcend reason I must tread the lonely forests Skid about in skies and minds Looking for the strength to die Without somewhere to go

zodiac 31-Aug-04/3:23 PM
PS-If you envy (or whatever) the comfort of believers because you struggle with all these problems surrounding religion while they don't - well, that's kind of backwards isn't it? If you're going to be a nonbeliever, why don't you try just not worrying about God (or whomever) and whatever he or it is or isn't doing, since right now you just seem like a regular believer with commitment problems? You might as well be one of those Existentialist Frenches or Stephen Daedalus.

PPS-If the "unanswered questions" you struggle with are Why is there so much suffering in the world or something such, you're still a believer! QED.




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