poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Swimming in Space & Fishing for the Luridness Monster by SupremeDreamer.

Christof26 Aug 2004

I'm sorry, I know a lot of peole think really highly of your stuff but I find this verbose, navel-gazing, self-regarding and, worst of all, unmusical and unrhythmic. This sounds like prose and rather than expressing your 'insanity' merely goes through the motions of explaining it; the ultimate effect is extremely unconvincing.