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Surfer (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Hunkers and leans arms outstreched into a torso twist then a hipflickheelturn and caress the alluring blue curling sheet then washed away in his own name.

Dan garcia-Black 18-Aug-04/4:12 AM
The old long boarder(10'6") understands the last four lines best.




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