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Losing A Friend (Free verse) by venusdemilo

I remember the times we spent laughing at the stupid things we said. I remember listening to your problems And you asking for advice In a field I had no experience in. I remember the misunderstood words we exchanged And the last I remember was the feeling I had Knowing you were gone. We were no longer a we. The feeling i had knowing I could no longer call you a Friend.

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