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From the despairs (Free verse) by Prince of Void

Life is merely the despairing memory That makes me the misery upon A fate melody to fade in And desires make me desolated in Whenever I am buried in melancholy The decaying day I could see The hollow man in the streets As walking away beside a crumbling city Those last seconds are so cold Reaching the way out From distances to the same despairs Again night fades out Figures are deleted Day by day as death whispers Upon the spire of desires Within verses rise from my own despairs

Prince of Void 8-Aug-04/12:34 AM
thank u for ur comment ...the silence is ur answer..u know sometime people think they know a lot about their worlds where they live in ...but sth always goes wrong ...i know i am not the best ...i wont be best i just try to complete my own verses in any condition ..maybe finaly i will say goodbye to the fancy place ...called world...whatever i lost in the world where this world and other sides lost ...u dont know me ..so u cant reach the sense i created in . .well do u think we care? many things ars still undiscovered ...we are just discovering ...........




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