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You Can't Kill A Dead Man! (Haiku) by dougsoderstrom

You can't kill a dead man, And I am not afraid to die!

Dan garcia-Black 31-Jul-04/5:31 PM
Haiku- 17 syllables, three lines, 5-7-5.

Even though
"You can not kill a
dead man and I am not a-
fraid to die, Buddy"
has the right syllable count, it doesn't stay true to form. I hate forms.
But I like a good line to say when I'm drunk at a bar and some other poet is calling me out(to fight, not to dance). Come to think about it, it works for either happenstance.-5-




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