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The Seasons, Changes (Free verse) by Frass

The seasons, changes the reason for changing remains Darting gulls the bull sharks return egrets prance a colorful spray of boatsails dancing will ever recall the supple, seasoned meaning of your changes Avon where the earth bends a muse friend dance your way back to me and remain.

god'swife 22-Aug-02/10:56 PM
This poem is confused. Seasoned meanings? O.K.... I have to give this a Zero. p.s. I was thinking about your previous comment regarding my poems being anti-men, and I realized the poems were so far from that. Untitled- is about the ectasy of the God/nature experience, Queen Anne's Escape is about the suicide of Anne Sexton, and The Hiakus are about the feminine aspect of creation. Were's the gender bias? Maybe your just afraid of me.




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