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The chance is lost inside all of my tears (Free verse) by Prince of Void

No chance to open her heart, Touch her hair and gaze at her eyes No strength to reach skies with broken wings and hopes No key to reveal the secret of yesterday as I m groping in" the gloomy path" Nowhere to plant my fancy That is now fading with the growth of twilight? No more fate for down-looking-face No word to say this is your day No morning ray to greet the day As they carry me to the grave No way to trace the dreams Upon the chest of dead and enchanted poet No happiness to seize my life again In all seasons of graveyard within peaceful rest No decision is to make and break the chain of my hands To fly over seas and meadow No passion to dance like butterfly on the blue floor of sky No earthly desire to be taken with me As I m vanished in the infinite void, No memory to be regained from the vision of pasts I know I will be lost in the feast of recreation Because of getting far from the shadows of regrets I will be reborn in melting frozen dew That gives strength to flower's crest To stand taller than Everest It grasped "the furthers " greatest the best For whom has the spirit of universe? Although no moment left To fill her up with spirit of the fresh of roses No mirror to show her beauty come and gone Cause the last chance is lost I've been lost inside inside the tears of eternity withered in depths of void

Shuushin 10-Jul-04/5:33 AM
this expression, "to plant one's fancy" - is this a euphamism for something...?

this phrase "passion to dance like butterfly on " sounds very "English as a second language" - intention?

This would make 5 or 6 very nice poems (if taken with something lighter in between sittings), but as it is - its a bit tedious, imho. Maybe too effective at evoking defeat.





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