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| Broken Memory | (Free verse) by | Broken |

Alone here .. Wondering what will become of the friendship That was once precious And now a piece of a broken memory Promises were made .. Problems were shared .. But still .. those didn't come to a final decision Where trust is concern .. Destiny and fate changes everything And so do these hearts And the lips which sealed all our promises .. The vision .. which holds our wishes and dreams .. Did I not try my best to save this friendship? Ask me and I'll surely answer .. But .. have you ever tried anything to hold it together? I'll be there whenever you need me Asking me for advices and it's all for free Listening to you pouring your heart's out Never bore me .. I know all that is a learning experience A life skill which I can make use .. And it's all thanks to you ... I owe you a lot friend .. I wish I could repay your kindness .. But after all that happened .. I leave to God and walk away ..

| Broken | 26-Jun-04/10:27 PM
My recent poem. Can't seem to remember where I
get the inspiration from though. The 2nd
and last stanza sucks .... I know. (",*)




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