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The Riddle of Creation (Free verse) by Dovina

Imagine knowing there is no such thing as death, Knowing you will be reunited with passed loved ones, Sure that God is watching you with loving eyes, Waiting with a shining world ready to receive you. Imagine knowing without a shade of doubt God will take care of His own. What comfort to know the riddle of creation.

zodiac 23-Jun-04/4:44 PM
I don't think you've upset anyone on this site by doing whatever it is you think you've done. Certainly not Dan garcia-Black, who couldn't interpret his way out of a week-old cod-bonnet.

This poem is pretty obviously the exact opposite of "a promotional poem for God". The idea of a "riddle of creation" that it's a "comfort" to know would be foreign and absurd to any right-minded God-believer, for one thing. And any Christian, Hindoo, or Islam silly enough to think of creation as a riddle would be comforted by the thought that he knew the answer, not the riddle, anyway.




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