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The Riddle of Creation (Free verse) by Dovina

Imagine knowing there is no such thing as death, Knowing you will be reunited with passed loved ones, Sure that God is watching you with loving eyes, Waiting with a shining world ready to receive you. Imagine knowing without a shade of doubt God will take care of His own. What comfort to know the riddle of creation.

Dovina 23-Jun-04/4:26 PM
I am a medocre female who has upset everyone on Poemranker by unintentionally making them think I have written a promotional poem for God. That is one of three interpretions, make that four, and I'm looking for anyone who cah see one of the others, better yet, someone who can see the ambiguity that is me, that is this poem, that has lived here before, that is not a bigot. Yes, I am hot now, but not, probably as you want. I drive men away like this.




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