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The Riddle of Creation (Free verse) by Dovina

Imagine knowing there is no such thing as death, Knowing you will be reunited with passed loved ones, Sure that God is watching you with loving eyes, Waiting with a shining world ready to receive you. Imagine knowing without a shade of doubt God will take care of His own. What comfort to know the riddle of creation.

Dovina 23-Jun-04/9:17 AM
Thank you for finding my poem a suitable place to vent your frustrations. I mean that seriously and with no animosity. I feel a bit honored to be the presenter of material that arouses someone in any way. It’s really quite unusual. I wish you would read the poem again and tell me why you hate it, if that’s not asking for the obvious. On the other matters, I agree with much of what you are saying, and though I’m a new persona on Poemranker, there’s a de déjà vu of having felt as you feel.




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