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Of Absinthe and Asphalt (Free verse) by pain killer
Wet green and feral demon
beloved of great artists and poets alike
such as horus8
and extra points
for being french
serge gainsberg
charlotte gainsberg
jaime zodiac
i think not brian
and as i run to escape the unyielding forumn of brianisms
i slip and tumble upon asphalt shards of solipsisitic gestalt
gestalt!
well it parallels
the puerile put downs
barbed wit
or maybe merely carbonated white dog shit?
who said you were a poet anyway?
my word it's hot in here
where are you?
ah
i find you
hiding beneath the vibrating hood
where your gasolene eyes gently germinate my feet
and under asphalt shards fall solipsistic lemondrops
tumbling like so much pretentious bullshit metaphorical nonsense
(not those fucking asphalt solipsistic shards again pal!)
and psuedo rimbaud claptrap
your ego trips...and stumbles
oh this is fucking rubbish
i mean
really come on
what fucking shite
but at least
i know it
and as
crowley said
in one of his
no doubt
absinthe fueled moments
know thyself
and i can think of one or two
who should take that
pearl
of
wisdom
on board
eh now brian
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