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The Red Basket (Free verse) by pain killer

The lonely lady stood outside the stonewalled cottage plucking damp linen and memories that would never be from a nylon line whilst angry chickens clucked around her feet a childs voice crying in the distance the lady looks around an angry adult admonishing a sharp slap and harsh words heard in the drift over long empty acres then silence the lady turns the linen packed tight in a red plastic basket held close to her breast she steps back slowly towards the door leaving a small embroidered cotton cap on the floor

pain killer 2-Jun-04/2:06 PM
okay codeine kid...i claim full responsiblity for the angry chickens, at least you slag me off with a modicum of wit..horus..you don't like my stuff..have you nothing better to do than to hang around poemranker spilling your not very clever bile with all the rest of us sad little people. Can't wait o check out your own stuff..oh i can't wait




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