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Sarah's Song (Lyric) by wilco

Sarah says she waited for the sun for as long as the night was dark. She's been through so much in her life. Seen a lot of things that no one should, but she's still beautiful when she smiles. The graying hair and amethyst eyes have made her shy away from tears. She keeps her picture of Cary Grant and a ring given to her by a lover, and she's still beautiful when she sings. There's something on her mind these days. A little reminder of thirty years. The white dress, the wine and the dance. Sarah stays up 'till dawn every night to see the sun rise on the hills. She shakes off the early morning chill and wraps the robe a little tighter, so she can feel the warmth of life. The balcony in the old hotel is high enough to catch the clouds. She still feels something in her soul for pretty days and careless flings. And she's still beautiful when she smiles. There's something on her mind these days. A little reminder of thirty years. The white dress, the wine and the dance.

Stephen Robins 19-May-04/4:59 AM
I have devised a cunning new means of commenting to reflect how good I feel the poem is. It is a simple formula the strength of the poem is the inverse of how unbrown the celebrity I leave as a comment is.

A sample may look as follows:

Ainslee Harriot : They don't come any browner -10-
Robert Kilroy-Silk: The colour and texture of a shamy leather -6-
David Dickinson: Orange - A fraud in my brown catergory -bow'ls-




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