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Go Figure (Free verse) by MacFrantic

Everyone says they've got me figured out That's great Except I can't seem to add the figures up myself I took a walk yesterday You know what I found? A tire for swinging A discarded windshield And a firetruck Some people say It was an accident I say the tree had it comin' Don't mind life too much Or life might start minding you And no one wants that.

richa 3-May-04/12:50 PM
Alright, not mad keen on the first verses, I can't work myself out sentiment. Tire should be tyre I think.

Like the final verse.




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