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Go Figure (Free verse) by MacFrantic

Everyone says they've got me figured out That's great Except I can't seem to add the figures up myself I took a walk yesterday You know what I found? A tire for swinging A discarded windshield And a firetruck Some people say It was an accident I say the tree had it comin' Don't mind life too much Or life might start minding you And no one wants that.

hypatia 3-May-04/8:35 AM
The first and last verses are a frame for a vague picture in between. The picture gives impressions, not conclusions. Good.




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