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Scorpion feet lucky rabbit (Free verse) by horus8
High desert love triangle will you fruit tree Can you spot me glacier & wind gusts Mountain meadows over dull yellow dunes To soons, goodbyes, rifles in each corner Turkish coffee Wearing my ruana Devil's tongue chile Mouthfuls of honey & mango preserves Even the dog knows better Then to nose poke a scorpion, but you see there is a brittle brown piece of plywood 30 yards from the front porch. Underneath it is a decomposing rabbit And a fat see through scorpion Poisonous, & barbed kisses full of babies. Heeled before it's time. Who said rabbit's feet were lucky?

Up the ladder: Summer
Down the ladder: Ment to be confusing

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.9615383
Weighted score: 6.94841
Overall Rank: 168
Posted: September 17, 2003 2:01 PM PDT; Last modified: September 17, 2003 2:11 PM PDT
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[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 17-Sep-03/5:15 PM | Reply
Ha ha ha whoever gave this a blue five is a lesbian vegetarian albanian cock ring of fire, and I didn't fall into.
[10] deleted user @ 64.63.203.103 | 17-Sep-03/7:06 PM | Reply
I really liked this poem..
I am too afraid to tell you which line I liked best.

ah what the hell. it's your iceberg tip caught in my craw..

Devil's tongue chile
Mouthfuls of honey
& mango preserves

[9] DreamerSupreme @ 66.81.145.47 | 18-Sep-03/10:47 AM | Reply
And a fat see through scorpion
Poisonous, & barbed kisses
full of babies.

-i had a crystal clear vision of the scorpion, and i like it.. i wish i could paint it and hang it on my wall, but im a poet because i couldnt draw worth a fuck.

btw, whats a ruana?

blessed with nine.
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > DreamerSupreme | 18-Sep-03/12:28 PM | Reply
It's a pancho from South America.
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