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Scorpion feet lucky rabbit (Free verse) by horus8

High desert love triangle will you fruit tree Can you spot me glacier & wind gusts Mountain meadows over dull yellow dunes To soons, goodbyes, rifles in each corner Turkish coffee Wearing my ruana Devil's tongue chile Mouthfuls of honey & mango preserves Even the dog knows better Then to nose poke a scorpion, but you see there is a brittle brown piece of plywood 30 yards from the front porch. Underneath it is a decomposing rabbit And a fat see through scorpion Poisonous, & barbed kisses full of babies. Heeled before it's time. Who said rabbit's feet were lucky?

Sent away by mommy 17-Sep-03/7:06 PM
I really liked this poem..
I am too afraid to tell you which line I liked best.

ah what the hell. it's your iceberg tip caught in my craw..

Devil's tongue chile
Mouthfuls of honey
& mango preserves





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