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In The Beginning (Free verse) by Dovina Big bang perhaps.
In Your image?
Uncertain thoughts
Like particlesâ locations?
Random ideas
As in mutations?
Creator of chaos,
I the result?
A starting point,
Do I ask too much?
Hard questions later.
Up the ladder:
Shut Up (Angry Progression)
Down the ladder:
Wind
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Posted: January 15, 2005 1:40 PM PST; Last modified: January 15, 2005 1:40 PM PSTWeighted score: 6.2727275 Overall Rank: 911 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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LOL
I'm displeased to find you're back to your old self-righteousness. You were better when you didn't have all the answers. Kind of lovable, even, like a hamster.
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I didn't get the last line, though.
:-/
Nice!
:)