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In The Beginning (Free verse) by Dovina

Big bang perhaps. In Your image? Uncertain thoughts Like particles’ locations? Random ideas As in mutations? Creator of chaos, I the result? A starting point, Do I ask too much? Hard questions later.

zodiac 17-Jan-05/5:42 AM
I'm displeased to find you're back to your old self-righteousness. You were better when you didn't have all the answers. Kind of lovable, even, like a hamster.




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