Re: MicroPoem by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
19-Sep-03/5:18 PM |
My God! Why didn't I think of something that profound!
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Re: let's pretend that we can write! by val |
28-Aug-03/3:10 PM |
Val, I give you a 10 because I see the humor and the wit of this poem!
Margaret
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Re: a comment on let's pretend that we can write! by val |
28-Aug-03/3:08 PM |
<~>, This was just a poem. It wasn't about Poemranker. I know Val (guess that puts her on a even bigger shit list) and this is just a poem she wrote one day (see c2000).
Are we feeling guilty?
Come on z, 'the most advanced forum for literary camaraderie in the civilized world?' ROFL!
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Re: The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus |
28-Aug-03/2:52 PM |
After the way you have treated me, I hate to say this but this is an excellent poem. I can be objective, can you?
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Re: Date Rape Gang Bang by Bachus |
28-Aug-03/2:43 PM |
First, I don't even think this qualifies as Haiku.
Second, you are a misogynist. This is a real -0-
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Re: a comment on Russian Roulette by <~> |
24-Aug-03/1:51 AM |
Question: You are asked her? This is true?
I like the poem but to me there is some confusion here:
He left you undone, still
Laughing until that shot stopped everything;-->
in the kitchen, ruined by
that hole he blew-->
and you never heard the crack but-->
The recoil sent you sprawling-----> The recoil sent her sprawling? How could she not hear the gun go off?
He didn't leave a note
or clean up his mess--> How can a dead man clean up a mess?
Or is this just good use of poetic licence?
Margaret
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Re: a comment on Musehearts Swimming Lessons by DreamerSupreme |
9-Jul-03/12:55 AM |
I don't know what you are talking about.
I know why I'm up all night, what's your excuse?
I am overwhelmed at the attention I am getting here. ;-)
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Re: SupremeDreamer by King Abdullah I |
9-Jul-03/12:28 AM |
Very potically incorrect.
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Re: Blind Walk Into Poem Ranker by DreamerSupreme |
9-Jul-03/12:21 AM |
So why you picking on me then?
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Re: Musehearts Swimming Lessons by DreamerSupreme |
9-Jul-03/12:15 AM |
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Re: a comment on Hi, my name is "Look at me, Stop it!" I'm Bi-polar by horus8 |
8-Jul-03/11:33 PM |
Nope, manic depressive disorder, OneFinger.
Any other questions so that you can make fun of me. Did you ever think you could push someone over the brink? Or care?
Didn't think so.
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Re: Iterated Fuck by nentwined |
5-Jul-03/12:35 PM |
Wow. Let's see we got onomatopoeia going strong, you keep my attention for sure, and you actually made my clit hard. Good write!
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Re: you will feel by nentwined |
5-Jul-03/12:26 PM |
Good. Is it an analogy of death?
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Re: a comment on The Drunkest ever by horus8 |
5-Jul-03/12:03 PM |
He don't like you to 'peace' him, so he told me.
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Re: a comment on The Drunkest ever by horus8 |
5-Jul-03/12:02 PM |
Don't apologize for being right. Everyone seems to be afraid of this bad-mannered-aSShole.
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Re: a comment on The Drunkest ever by horus8 |
5-Jul-03/11:59 AM |
Anyone is an idiot who doesn't think your shit doesn't stink.
You are no poet. You could be, maybe, if you learned to take constructive criticism and stop lashing out at people.
What the f*ck if the matter with you anyhow? Are you just plain evil?
You really shouldn't piss a bipolar off.
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Re: a comment on The Drunkest ever by horus8 |
5-Jul-03/11:57 AM |
"Ranking has no value to me other then to watch others need for it." - Bullshit - I suppose that is why you have sooooooooooo many names?
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Re: Poetic Soup [revised] by SupremeDreamer |
5-Jul-03/11:43 AM |
Not bad. But I won't rank you because of my stigma poem mutilated!
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Re: The Artists Creation by Kitch |
3-Jul-03/2:40 PM |
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Re: Nude pictures of children at work by Shardik |
3-Jul-03/2:33 PM |
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