Re: a comment on My last ever poemranker transmission by King Abdullah II	3-Jul-03/12:49 AM
You just joined with a new name.
Re: My last ever poemranker transmission by King Abdullah II	3-Jul-03/12:47 AM
"We're a bunch of talentless no-hopers. That's right. Every single one of us." Speak for yourself. You had an awful mouth! Get kicked off? Shardik, horus8, <{Baba^Yaga}> and Bachus Ding dong the which is dead...
Re: a comment on STIGMA / MUSEHEART by JoyLuck	3-Jul-03/12:40 AM
Well, in my poem depicts the stigma of mental illness, I think the word you want is stamen when the hand reaches down to grab because that would be the feminine (sucking) of the pistil. I think. :) Here is a free tool for you: http://www.iespell.com/ Peace, Margaret
Re: STIGMA / MUSEHEART by JoyLuck	3-Jul-03/12:24 AM
Well, you can write. Not a bad poem at all. Except my stigma was the 'archaic' version where you are talking about the stamen, I believe. Peace, McR
Re: a comment on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck	3-Jul-03/12:09 AM
Sometimes they do, you are right. That one stands on its own, don't you think?
Re: a comment on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck	3-Jul-03/12:08 AM
"don't mess with california" Threats? :)
Re: a comment on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck	3-Jul-03/12:06 AM
No you to me to "suck it." Really now...
Re: a comment on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck	3-Jul-03/12:00 AM
Who me? We having a civil war now? You are ridiculous. Maybe you don't know who you are 'messing' with.
Re: a comment on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck	2-Jul-03/11:57 PM
Look, JoyLuck, you asked what offended me. I told you. Don't ask the question if you don't want to know the answer and if you want to be a real writer, stop being so defensive and calling names (all of you).
Re: a comment on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck	2-Jul-03/11:54 PM
Why not? There are wiser ones that came before.
Re: a comment on Its Blue by aurora	2-Jul-03/11:37 PM
Nice poem. "horus8' - why don't you find something useful to do? Ever try being nice? Didn't your Mama breast feed you?
Re: a comment on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck	2-Jul-03/11:12 PM
You call your own work "shit." Don't bother. I don't read shit. At least not more than once.
Re: a comment on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck	2-Jul-03/11:10 PM
"One always speaks badly when one has nothing to say." --Voltaire
Re: a comment on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck	2-Jul-03/11:09 PM
No one is lashing out but you. You are so immature that you resort to calling me names when you know nothing about me.
Re: a comment on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck	2-Jul-03/11:06 PM
Your language, your content and the fact that it isn't poetry. It may be another form of art but its garbage to me.
Re: MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck	30-Jun-03/1:48 PM
How can you call this poetry? Other is right. There is no category for this garbage. I mean really, you don't say anything and it is offending.
Re: Eyes by Jake	25-May-03/1:46 AM
I like this Jake. I think you could improve upon the poem with a few less commas. Do you read them aloud to see if it flows well? And it should be 'hoping.' The poem has a lot of depth and I think just needs a little tweeking. Peace,