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SupremeDreamer (Free verse) by King Abdullah I
He's so gay He's so gay Fucks men all day He's so gay He's got AIDS He's got AIDS Fucks queer old maids He's got AIDS

Up the ladder: hurricane love
Down the ladder: Paean

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.4
Weighted score: 4.9284782
Overall Rank: 9336
Posted: July 8, 2003 6:30 AM PDT; Last modified: October 8, 2003 7:39 AM PDT
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[10] dmzoacan @ 67.75.25.129 | 8-Jul-03/7:30 AM | Reply
ha ha ha ha good one good one, in the tradition of Settle. Who is me. Most of my immitators don't get it but I think you do. Childish, insulting, disgusting, strong like a horse's leg yet delicate like a country sausage wrapped in silk.
[0] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 8-Jul-03/12:26 PM | Reply
"ermph" That's the souund gay men make in the closet of tranquility.
[0] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.21.223 | 8-Jul-03/1:09 PM | Reply
Whats sad is I'm amused by this.
[n/a] JoyLuck @ 68.75.28.126 | 8-Jul-03/10:23 PM | Reply
the HIV is not funny
unless it's DA
[n/a] DreamerSupreme @ 204.31.162.63 | 8-Jul-03/10:25 PM | Reply
ooo. Lesbianism. yesssss. ok mistah.. ;) lets do some dictionary magic kiiiidoooo... ;D dont blink.
[n/a] deleted user @ 209.234.157.45 | 9-Jul-03/12:28 AM | Reply
Very potically incorrect.
[n/a] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.51 | 8-Oct-03/8:41 AM | Reply
well, it rhymes, so ...
[0] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 8-Oct-03/2:51 PM | Reply
What If he breaks into your house one night and bleeds in your funnel but? Then you'll have BRAIDS!
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