regarding some deleted poem...	4-Mar-03/5:15 PM
Your poem successfully paints a Piccasso-type image of a distorted self through your disordered listings and implications of human features (ie the mind, heart and eyes). Was this purposeful? I also liked how the substance around which this poem is based changed from madness to wine, to blood (or atleast it's implied) and finally to tears- indicating that sometimes tears show more pain than blood (emotion hurts more than anything physical). The formation of word over word creates a smooth flow to your work, also symbolic of the flow of liquid I presume. I could analyze your poetry for hours! It gives me so much insight to your personality! From this, I gather that you percieve your intelligence to be your initial strong-point, your heart is where your pain is felt, and your eyes are the main expressors of your emotion. Extremely well done!