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20 most recent comments by strider1 (21-40)

Re: Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof 9-Oct-02/9:58 AM
Yeh, its a bit of alright is this. it seems slightly reminiscent of someone-can't put me finger on it just yet, it'll come to me. Splendid effort old bean-10/10
regarding some deleted poem... 9-Oct-02/10:06 AM
A lot of apparently prehensile prose that on inspection lends itself more to the machinations of an adolescent mind with its elevation and repetition of words banished by poets. Well Shange Ntozake uses them, so does W H Auden and a few of the other greats I shouldn't wonder. It has merit-more B+ than A+ but the sycophantic plebeians here wouldn't know the difference. I say vive la difference !
Re: Work by poetandknowit 9-Oct-02/10:08 AM
Rambling and innocuous, in love with himself or herself and smug.
regarding some deleted poem... 9-Oct-02/10:11 AM
This guy uses the word " and " more than any other I have seen and " but " p-l-ease. What other sort of insomnia is there if not nightly-unless you are on night shits I guess and then its daily insomnia-go figure-


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