Re: a comment on All You Need Is Gloves by -=DIABETES=-	24-Apr-05/8:37 AM
There's more to poetry than grammar you know. I need constructive critisism, not nitpicking. I like the idea about setting it to some kind of pop tune, though. Maybe something by the Beatles?
Re: a comment on All You Need Is Gloves by -=DIABETES=-	24-Apr-05/6:46 AM
Hey thanks for the feedback, lol. I tried thinking of an alternative for 'manufacturer', but in the end I just went on feeling. My biggest concern about this poeme is that the original was about love, which is a really important part of the human condition. Gloves are also really important, but they aren't as important as love. I'm concerned the piece might seem a bit shallow in comparison :( Have you got any suggestions?