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evolution 9 (Free verse) by wilco

up from the water across the ancient sand slow mutation at the genetic level from mammal to snake and back again straining to find a place in the universe lacking the skills necessary for survival synapses firing and gaining solid form coursing in veins not meant for living ghost stories not withstanding it's written in the stones you don't believe

Shuushin 25-Apr-04/10:32 AM
looky, its a arrowhead.

What is this creature, and how did its description merit a ten from daveslady? Are you, by any chance, Dave?

I can give it a nine I guess, cuz well if its good enough for her...





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