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Take a deep breath, little girl don't cover your ears - let the screams escape. Two pale legs dangling with the nerves dancing double time. The whispers argue loudly with your mind, while your bed treats you like a stranger. A heightened sense of senses jumpstarts your fear and loss of reality. Stay quiet, little girl. Don't cry - no one will understand. Two tense legs vibrate uniformly with nerves demagnetizing the bed. A heightened sense of seeing pries your young eyes to seek normalcy. Experience a flashback, young woman. Don't close your eyes - let memories run their course. Two legs entwine with the desk, nonsensical yelled whispers and hushed screams take you back to the days of dancing nerves. A heightened sense of knowledge jumpstarts your willpower and drags the experience whispering and screaming to locked up depths.

Fraser Allonby Q.C. 22-Apr-04/7:45 AM
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