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Hunny (Free verse) by Venus

Since you changed my name to Hunny, the kitchen has become a place for cooking, not fucking. No longer on the counter, before dining elsewhere. Don't drink too much wine, or stay up much too late. No longer care to fall asleep wrapped in my legs, soaking wet. Still sometimes, you quietly maul me, middle of the night, as I feign sleep; little noise but for your labored breath. I wonder sometimes, I wonder If I dreamt it. Since you changed my name to Hunny, I prepare your dinner each and every night, and pause at the stains on that cheap counter top, and thoughtfully consider, poisoning your drink.

horus8 16-Aug-02/1:42 PM
i'm sorry, but that's to fucking sweet, jesus christ be my wife, i can't help but think you are toiling with underachievers why? why? why must i be prone to such filthy sentiments?...aye...because..i am filth..damn skippy, but you my dear ate prometheus's liver and squeezed his member skinny...tis better to wipe your feet than wipe his brow 9/100




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