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The Unholiest Sonnet Ever (Sonnet) by horus8

My Holiness is beyond repairing Nude, I ride off with your pygmy pony Your grasp of poetry has been scaring - - off those that came shopping for Bologna. Your Sonnets are odes, but your Odes are daft? Please forgive me for being this candid Your cogs are no match for my pumping shaft While you stare at your prick, limp & flaccid. Loyola Marymont private school brat? I wanted only to clue your ass in, but proud on your rear, you show off your hat Assuming trite writing's never a sin. Unholy adjectives can't save you now From browning your lips on my uni brow.

Shuushin 27-Feb-04/7:07 PM
where is the unholy part?

Moves along purty well.




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