brazen15 Aug 2002
HEY BABBITT!...i loved this for kinda the same reason...its written a lot like some of my earlier poems so i found it easy to follow...starts off in one place and seems to travel through many different paths, only to have them all end in the same place...got some funk to it, yeah...plus hey, least it wasn't like the first time crossing the equator there ex-navy boy.