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The birdboy that was (Icarus) (Free verse) by Y2kSlamPoet

It went on and on about nothing. It was a tricksy child attempting to convince others of its non-existent meaning A parrot that droned on and on about nothing Convincing those naive that it was pretty. A birdboy that was defeathered, boiled alive and eaten for supper-- meaning still nothing Turned to fuel so those that heard his futile screams can live to hear the sound of silence.

Shuushin 15-Feb-04/6:10 PM
crwncka1? I didn't think that last bit was too badly made...

It's a very dense prosaic style, but I can appreciate the use of language in it.

I wouldn't call it pretty, but certainly not an attemp at trickery.

That's what this poem is about then, about another poemranker poet? Yeah, about that... how's that whole "wounded schoolboy" thing workin for ya?

You have some good perspectives, why waste it on stuff like this?







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