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silence of the sky (Free verse) by david

in the silence of the sky, we spoke of the silver moon, how every house must have a builder, how the fields of green were a blessing and how the rocks would cry out, "be praised for all your tenderness, and by the works of you the builder, whose miracle is never known by all" streets, cars, and cement mixers were alien things to us, no more than idioms of an archaic language.

horus8 14-Aug-02/12:49 AM
david who? just joshing..big strange comparisons make my head swim with sharks. i like humus though..7/10-




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