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Day of Reckoning (Free verse) by Lenore

Like a sickly sweet smell from the depths of hell; your vision in my mind implores me, to fashion a death so vile and base, no mercy or peace can find thee. A villanous state my thoughts in dwell; enraged by your indignant apathy. How well you disquise your selfish intent, while the stench of your truth proves brashly. The blatent deceit in which you repeat, those ghastly yet savvy deeds; ignite me to smite thee, though no perilous warning impedes. Onward in lashing! Pure rage in the bashing! Your terror reign, incomplete! Cut down from your thrown and left all alone, to lie bleeding and wrought with defeat.

horus8 13-Aug-02/11:45 AM
wait hold everything..why i hold my penis..sure this isn't the most stylish, intelligent, or multi faceted piece, but it's got villianous, deceit,bashing, blood evil doings, and sickly sweey smells...and most of all..big boobies terrorizing..that's not so bad..we can't always fuck sylvia plath(who wasn't good looking anyway) sometimes we need a heather thomas poem to stimulate the flacid capilaries..lighten up d.a.. no one thought you would like it any way..most of us have a keen awareness of what you like.. you no deep movies like xxx, and muscle shows, drag racing, ding dongs, and science fiction comic books, which is why your a demigouge w/ a nucleur fissioned engine. morning guys. my thumb still hurts.it's officially a vicadine day. so mote it be!s




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