Poemranker [Replying] Sun May 05 23:32:13 PDT 2024

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The Nicotine Addicts Jangling Tobbaconists Conversation (Other) by Jigg

I need a certain lighter I require one that's brighter One that sparks at dash And I need it in a flash Not this one or that No not one with a cat Nor the one with the bat I wont do with any old tat I need a certain lighter one that is somewhat mightier No, not one covered in scratches Oh fuck it, just gimme matches

horus8

12-Aug-02/11:58 AM

ok. your right...your title is a better poem then your poem..as for personal slurs..i'm typing left handed today and i'm on lithium...i have a dislocated thumb, and a rash on my pecker(from wetsuit) i smoke marlboros cuz it helps me hide my evil pock marked face..plus it helps me get laid and feel better about my tiny pud..i'm sorry..so sorry about the insinuation...here allow me to correct myself..i meant to say wow..what an impressive work of staggering genius..yes! this is exactly how i feel, and what i believe all smokers must feel and think..you are a prophet and a righteous manhandler..oops..man..woman.fuckit.skilled writer.insightful. you have distinction and you jigg better then god..what were we talking about oh yeah..commenting specifically on the poem, not the creator of the poem, because of course they have nothing in common according to some undeserving wretches, your rhyming is mediocre if even that..the setup is non existent and your descriptive senses border on the feeling i get when i step in urine first thing in the morning with a brand new pair of socks on..i love it..lets smoke ourselves towards more pee to step in.yes lets..o

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