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Existence (Free verse) by ThoughtfulSoul

Like Stars I fall into the background Like love I think I lost myself Like everything I've ever known it disappeared eventually To exists where you don't want to Is like not existing at all But to exist where you want to and not to be wanted Is like not existing at all

horus8 6-Aug-02/8:26 PM
i don't wear ad-idd-as. i walk bare-footed to hand select my papyrus and pull my quill from the arse of a spanish hill turkey. then. nude. i write to you a comment in five seconds..more moving than all of your combined work..for you..out of a love for writing. there is nothing wrong with the children. and fuck the chinese. cuz you meant taiwan. sweat shop children have nothing to do with fortune cookies..got that! "thoughtfulsoul" that's your metaphor of the day. use your pen to change the world, or fucking hand it to someone that can. Next! key word here is "thoughtful" not "thinkfool"a




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