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Reality (Free verse) by ThoughtfulSoul

Sometimes I wonder if it's all not real That I'm caught in this ongoing nightmare that one day I might wake out of I keep thinking that life can't be this bad if there really is a God So it has to be a figment of my torn up imagination I'm like a caged animal I can see the world around me But I can't interact with it There are instances where I feel free But eventually I realize that I'll never be What's sad is that sometimes It all hits me and I know that this life is real and I know that I have to deal with it So I begin to act normal Swallow the fears I have and live through this so called life

Bachus 5-Aug-02/6:46 PM
A penny for your thoughts. I am "rude", "bitchy", and bloating on thoughtfulsouls,angels,whitmans,keats',beets',beaks',hoofs',soulfull cereal, tight-vanerial, poeties,horus' and lovelysouless angels-of-wit shit tourettes fit slit FUCK MY CANINE CUNT YOU GUTTLESS NAKED CHELO PLAYING heart longing loveletter toting and caged children that don't know what ye must do! Just do it, like your uncle sam taught you too. Write about "realizing" and "imaginiation" (which happens to be the longest word used in this stew besides "figment" and "nightmare", well shit, it's complicated and does a whole lot for me it's almost a profligacy. Well almost?




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