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A Passing Love (Free verse) by razorgrin

One fine May day in a crowded cafe I sat with a coffee and scone but then from behind me a voice did say "May I join you?" I'm no longer alone. She was Jane, her eyes a bottomless blue. Like the moon and the sun she did shine. As I stood,she did too, said "I'm going with you" and we left with her ivory arm wrapped in mine. For hours I walked the streets of this town with this radiant girl on my arm. She clung closer in neighbourhoods seeming run-down I promised with me she'd come to no harm. On the sidewalk before us a cat caught a bird, played with it before letting it die. My sweet Jane watched in shock and murmured some words and I saw that she'd started to cry. She dried her eyes as we walked from that lane and wondered where next we would roam when the clouds burst in torrents of ice-cold rain I suggested some tea at my home. We talked and we kissed and drank our tea she with honey, I took mine neat when oblivion crept up on her but not me I confessed hers was tampered to make it more sweet. You've stayed in my arms, as I have in yours my dearest darling love, Jane. But morning has come and we'll go to the moors you'll be buried benath cold grey rain.

horus8 4-Aug-02/5:52 PM
oh..indeed..surely that wasn't my point. god knows how i enjoy dining on all of your cutting edge abbreviations. yourL33's and yourAsls. and your all of your other timeless classics. i don't have a clue as to what any of it means.i'm so sheltered and eager.oh master of the round turd..i beseech you.. have patience..i know not of the power of pascal and cobal, and how you must have been one of the leading fore skins or perhaps creator of these fine prehistoric languages, or perhaps we are back to the days of pagers and upside down love messages..here flip your monitor upside down cuz here comes one now
"em erob uoy" "nillicinep yrt" your talk of costant shitting is as stimulating as me and my uncle farting at five and ten at grandma's kitchen table. piles and piles of fart and shit tapes stacked up until i fell in love and then realized the errors of my gross ways. life is not all poo, and if you hold your gas and talk in secret internet codes your dreams will come true. mickey mouse and donald fuck off said go put on your costume and join the procedings. god knows your fans are waiting. ASL! DIKTRKL! CNTPUMPR!
p.s you don't really have to flip the screen you can use a mirror if you still have any left in your house since the accident. vanerialwarts.bigstick.ireland.saltmine??




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