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Invisible too (Free verse) by horus8

Overcast was the climate. Uncolored was the day. She is leaning on the headstone. The markers of memories. The single rose spins, nauseously. In the month of Shivat her face is tawny. I am assuming that she senses my presence. But assumption has not a spine, nor a structure. Along with the cemetery breeze; is a stowaway, a very interesting -- intruder. Compelling the lilac. Divorcing the snapdragon. The slit of her dress is long. Her leg is pulling at the hazel of my eyes. The rough of my tongue, on the smooth of her thigh. To make my approach is all that's left. Finishing this over-imagined conversation should help make things -- right. Here I am now. In front of them both. The stone is nameless, in the high-grass. Her knees cannot buckle, and I am being withheld, Incommunicado. Nothing resolved, we choose -- solitude.

horus8 31-Jul-02/2:22 PM
listen..kawakurdi..i am moved..but it's only a matter of time before 6dark6angel6 gets back from his lunch of fritos and snaps to carpet bomb this mother fucking, mother hugging vomit with an onslaught of trident missiles and screaming eagles with trumpets and gabriel and druel and osama and bombs and kittens and hemp lubricants..its only a matter of time. but i still feel slightly vaguely touched. you can hear on mp3 at gangbox.com..it has whales and techno drums it rubs me raw i hope you hate it. fuck shit.fuck i have to go to the store.smoke breal then re-edit phone tapclaptruelies.later




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