Shuushin9 Oct 2003
Some lovely images here including the kitten bit (confusing though with drowning and kite string -
maybe just the effects of the rye and ergot fungus?)
at the start, can you do something with "sun falls down" - where else might it fall? Up?
"frost blow-touch" is noteable; nice.
I'm not going to pretend to understand about a quarter of it, but it has a nice flow nonetheless, so I'll just go along for the ride.